Good work, really captivating, and I don't even like poetry that much. I want to read more of your stuff, but I just don't have the time right now, eventually I will!

i love this. thats all i can say. this is going on my favorites.

Nicely writen. It flowed well.

Excellent as all ways. The imagery was magnificent, made me think of summer days, and anything fethery light and wispy. Beautiful. :)

'The bones of trees and skins of leaves.' :sigh: That line was killage.

So much imagery, I got lost in it, seriously. I love this poem. It made me nod many times at those thoughts I think only too often. Lovely.

As strange as it all is, I really like this piece. Leaves the mind to wonder. . :D I especially like the latin at the end, very nice. meg

entropy is one of my favorite words. this made me smile. amused me in a good way. i can't quite describe why.