I really like this. Seriously, I do. :-)

I like how you characterize Mindy and Ziah. I can relate to Mindy with buying clothes from the Thift store and setting her own trends. Good twist later on in the story, even though I was expecting that it was going to be a love-hate relationship from the verbal lashing; but I definitely didn't expect them to have been going out already. So I thought it was well executed. And thank you for portraying trailer parks and the people who live in them without relying on the stereotypes and myths. The same with African Americans.

Despite some of the things that could be worked on (if I list them, then it would be a repeat of the other reviews I sent), I still enjoyed reading this. The only major disappointment I had was that this was only a oneshot. After reading the ending, I wanted more about Ziah and Mindy - and it's not just because they're an interracial couple. I like the way they interacted around each other and then admit their faults in calling each other names later on. The ending just felt sudden to me. More could be fleshed about them and their families, friends, etc., but it's just a suggestion.

I hope you'll have a Happy Birthday! I don't know when it is, though. If it passed already, then I hope you had a good one. Keep writing! *Hugs* :D

you are such an awsome writer...i was not excting that at all...love the twist tho!

OMG that was WOW. I was following along and then and then yah um WOW, not giving out the plot, but I'd like to see a sequel one day? Maybe I LOVED it was a one-shot but just a thought.Anyways can't wait to read more from you,
Love Middi

That was awesome1 I was not expecting them to be dating and just faking it for everyone else. Awesome!

you got me good...i didnt expect them to be girlfriends before this..all good through! unexpected things make a story better

awesome oneshot. I loved the twist. that was completely different from what I was expecting...hence the term "twist", I suppose.

I never expected for Ziah to date Mindy...that was so amazing! I swear I thought they hated the other's guts!

Yeah, I can see why this is one of your favorites. It's one of mine too. Your sensitivity to subjects that don't directly relate to you astounds me. Serious empathy or something. Adding this to my favorite.

Oh my gosh!! Its so cute!! I really believed they hated each other then... Ziah got to the house and it was just so... AWESOME! I really loved it!! I'm called an oreo too, so it hurt me to when Mindy called Ziah an oreo, but then when I found out why I was just like aww... So yeah. ^^ Well I'm going to stop gushing over your story. Its just so cool!! I can't help it! ^^

Aw, this story is so cute...Plus, it let me put off writing my college application essay for a bit, hah.

I so didn't see that coming! Haha.. I thought Mindy was such a bitch. But not anymore! I'm just like.. aww.. =)

I must say that i really enjoyed the twist on this one shot. Very different from the usual writing that you do but i did like. I think that it would be interesting to see a story about how their relationship acutually started and maybe the future.

Great work...love to see more from you!

omg this story rocks. i was so shocked when Ziah went to Mindy's house and found out that they were dating and for a year. it will be better for them in college. great story. keep updating. update soon please.

Hahaha, I love how you shock the reader in this chapter. Funny story. Good stuff, keep it up and update soon!

Hi again! :D I felt so bad about neglecting to review you for so long that I decided to give you another. ^^ This story deserves more, anyway. Great oneshots usually don't get enough.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this little short story, and I hope you try and do more of them like you said you would. (See, I'm trying to guilt you in to it now! >3 I'm so evil.)

I liked both Ziah and Mindy as characters. Especially Mindy, because she reminds me a teensy bit of one of the crazy girls that lives in my head. They even have a similar name. My Mands is definitely different, though... Mandy, that is. See? I told you the names were similar.

Note: I tried to count all of the characters in my head once. I gave up at eighty. Hehehe... Yep, I'm crazy.