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MiddiVampira 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseOMG that was WOW. I was following along and then and then yah um WOW, not giving out the plot, but I'd like to see a sequel one day? Maybe I LOVED it was a one-shot but just a thought.Anyways can't wait to read more from you, Love Middi
FM Radio 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome1 I was not expecting them to be dating and just faking it for everyone else. Awesome!
spikesagitta 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuseyou got me good...i didnt expect them to be girlfriends before this..all good through! unexpected things make a story better
up falls down 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseawesome oneshot. I loved the twist. that was completely different from what I was expecting...hence the term "twist", I suppose.
Starz of Sorrow 2007-06-29 ch 1,	abuseI never expected for Ziah to date Mindy...that was so amazing! I swear I thought they hated the other's guts!
Cinera 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I can see why this is one of your favorites. It's one of mine too. Your sensitivity to subjects that don't directly relate to you astounds me. Serious empathy or something. Adding this to my favorite.
SuicideChild 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh!! Its so cute!! I really believed they hated each other then... Ziah got to the house and it was just so... AWESOME! I really loved it!! I'm called an oreo too, so it hurt me to when Mindy called Ziah an oreo, but then when I found out why I was just like aww... So yeah. ^^ Well I'm going to stop gushing over your story. Its just so cool!! I can't help it! ^^
ThePurpleMoon 2006-09-20 ch 1,	abuseAw, this story is so cute...Plus, it let me put off writing my college application essay for a bit, hah.
multiples of six 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abuseI so didn't see that coming! Haha.. I thought Mindy was such a **. But not anymore! I'm just like.. aww.. =)
Lost My Socks 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abuseI must say that i really enjoyed the twist on this one shot. Very different from the usual writing that you do but i did like. I think that it would be interesting to see a story about how their relationship acutually started and maybe the future. Great work...love to see more from you!
Zzub Yearlight 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseomg this story rocks. i was so shocked when Ziah went to Mindy's house and found out that they were dating and for a year. it will be better for them in college. great story. keep updating. update soon please.
Addicted2music 2006-03-07 ch 1,	abuseHahaha, I love how you shock the reader in this chapter. Funny story. Good stuff, keep it up and update soon!
Rogue Roxness 2006-02-23 ch 1,	abuseHi again! :D I felt so bad about neglecting to review you for so long that I decided to give you another. ^^ This story deserves more, anyway. Great oneshots usually don't get enough. Anyway, I really enjoyed this little short story, and I hope you try and do more of them like you said you would. (See, I'm trying to guilt you in to it now! >3 I'm so evil.) I liked both Ziah and Mindy as characters. Especially Mindy, because she reminds me a teensy bit of one of the crazy girls that lives in my head. They even have a similar name. My Mands is definitely different, though... Mandy, that is. See? I told you the names were similar. Note: I tried to count all of the characters in my head once. I gave up at eighty. Hehehe... Yep, I'm crazy.
Al Kristopher 2006-02-08 ch 1,	abuseShoujo-ai/lesbian content = GoodInterracial relationships = GoodRival romance = GoodPolar opposites romance = Good Put it all together and whaddya got? The worst story ever! ... ...Uh, wait--let me back up a sec. (reviews) Okay. What we REALLY have is a story that is four times better than most other stories because it has all this Good stuff in it! Keep writing good...OR ELSE!
magemaster 2006-01-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is an excellent stroy! I loved it! It was funny, romantic, and sneaky. Great work!

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