Reviews for Salt and Sand - FictionPress.com

TylerB 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseWow, this one's quite moving as well. Funny but I can actually relate quite a bit to the whole age thing. Actually it was the insperation for one for my most recent poems. (company of rubbish) Great write by the way. Muchly enjoyed
Setsuna529 2007-08-02 ch 1,	abuseThe phrase "the loop-hole’s noose" is really cool.
LordK 2006-05-07 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. I love the theme that it presents, but I think it could have perhaps have a little more clarity in presenting that theme; honestly, I couldn't determine if your conlusion was that it is right or wrong to focus on "how you held my hand" rather than the "chaos" That being said, I thought the third stanza was brilliant "There's a lot to say for freedom\When it comes on cue" is endlessly brilliant. I mean, seriously, brilliant. So is "Corruption's a nice heaven\If you hell's not sin". Then the following stanza makes me want to bow down before your writer-ly throne. I really got a lot from the poem, like, besides the relationship elements. In any case, it was a great poem. applause
natosha 2006-01-07 ch 1,	abuseI can relate to this, but not in the sense of age. This is really good though, I love it. The little bit of imagery in the beginning was enough to make the whole piece brilliant. xoxox