|Reviews for You cannot love in death|
| Persufala 1/7/06 . chapter 1
hmm... i like the originality of how you are conveying the theme. it really is good. but they are some confusing parts where one can't be sure what you are talking about. you may want to think about clearing it up some.
| Just another reviewer 1/7/06 . chapter 1
Only one word to describe this.. beautiful... "A cloud slept thin, draped over the lake." I like that.. you describe well.. good job!