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empressofwierd 2008-02-10 ch 9,	abuseI luv the story, please update i have been waiting 4ever
Laura 2007-08-01 ch 9, anon.	abuseUpdate soon =] I miss the storie.
soul2quz 2007-03-12 ch 9,	abuseHi. I wuved the story so far. and even though i am a new reviewer i still am demanding that you post soon. The story cracks me up with everything so out of norm yet so right.
Ck90 2007-02-11 ch 9,	abusewow!! i haveven't reviewed in a while!! So here it goes! I agree with her very productive day; gave brother nightmares, gave sebastian sexual fantasies, fell in love with brother in laws accent very productive!! Rock on!!
kolson 2007-01-15 ch 9,	abuseThe story is sWeEt! Especially the hippie parents. If only, if only (sighs). As for Sebastian, ubercutielicious!!. I always try to picture people and they always come out as, well, not quite right. At the moment, Sebastian is the take-home-chef guy (like I said, not quite right). I love how Journey says buddah, groovy, and all that jazz. Very fancy:) ~Thanks!
A. L. Deles 2007-01-11 ch 9, anon.	abusehey its mee..lol just dont want to sign in (i dont think i can remember my password) lol. thanks for the reply :) !! yeah how embarrasing sh*t - i forgot he is a science teacher.. mr heath.. damn... i dont know where i got the english thing from .. hehe my bad!! forgive me :) lol.. anyways - lol new INSIGHT into the story.. i met a TEACHER.. in a CLUB once.. gros i just kept laughing when he told me he's a teacher!! ahaha because..gros.. he teaches kids that are like.. i think 11 or 12yrs old.. ew gross cause he was coming on to me LOL. and all i could think of was.. eww he teaches.. he's quite young too... 20 i think.. but he's such a sweet guy.. and not a bad looker.. just... not my type? lol. this chapter.. bleh :P not a lot happened.. a bit mor einfo on the family and mr heath's family.. but i doubt u'll want to expand more on that.. i like that u keep the story light hearted.. u gonna keep it like that or u gonna bring in hmm heavier issues? but whatever u wish will be good! hm yeah this chapter i feel is more of a bridging one :) not too much development in the plot hehe ps, i love journey's comments! especially the "he'll be too tired, he wont feel a thing when i come back to molest him' ahaha that got me laughing out loud :) well this is all from me for now.. i might review againt later with more.. ermm writing related comments haha this was more a chat lol. keep up the good work :) anna
Paisley 2007-01-06 ch 9,	abuseYay! a new chapter! Please please update soon!
WinterRaven292 2007-01-05 ch 9,	abuseHey look! Shout-out! Lol. XP Yay! Anyways, good chapter...Can't wait for the next one. Seriously...Tomorrow, got it? Lol. No, I'm just kidding. ~Winter~
Autumniator 2007-01-05 ch 9, anon.	abusewhich two teachers? hm hmm? I think I know hehehe
Alenor 2007-01-04 ch 9,	abuseheya, this is a great chappie. i can't wait for more to see what happens ~ Alenor.
Lightning Storm 2007-01-04 ch 9,	abuseugh, I love this story. Update soon HAPPY NEW YEAR
Lovediamond15 2007-01-03 ch 9,	abusesnow! tries to run into story ouch, didnt work o.o ah well, nice chappy, me likey! :D well, update when u can, cos its fab
diamondewdrops 2007-01-02 ch 9,	abusehm. weird family. um what else. oh yeah. its sorta weird how journey calls Mr. Heath Mr. Heath, since theyre gonna fall in love right? unless shes just gonna go ohmygod i love you.. hmm. forgot his first name. but this chapter was sexy. well more cute, i loved sleepy mr. heath. okay its sexy too. updates?
rina 2007-01-02 ch 9, anon.	abusehahaha. i dont know why, but this story really makes me laugh. please update soon, because i really like this story, and thats saying something because i normally dont like student-teacher relationships. ;)
dawn's unforgiving darkness 2007-01-01 ch 9,	abusehaha good chappie

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