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| compunctious 2006-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseJens. I like it so far. I only found one mistake, but I thought I'd let you know of it since you're anal and such *private giggle* /Carmin wished he had be sensible enough to have left the porch light on./"had been" instead of "had be" Love you |