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| The Postscript 2006-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseYes...something I am feeling so strongly. Keep writing. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseJust beautiful, left me speechless. Especially with that one line, "I wasn't alone anymore". EB |
| Gleechumber 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the way that this is written. The lines are kind of choppy, but that works well in this case. |