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poetic abortion
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abusethisisbrillanceatitsfinest.

yeah, I'm odd.

~* noelle
laughter at the funeral
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abusehmm...it has a kind of gothic feel...probably because of the playing ghost and old bar...really nice rhymings too...and the aura and the imagery you've created in the poem is really awesome...very good job...oh and pls do check my poems if you have the time...

truly yours...
hey maria
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is really

really

good.

(Yes, that's all.)
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