|Reviews for The Dusty Window|
| chaos called creation 1/14/06 . chapter 1
Amazing metaphor on how people rather pretend they're seeing something magical through tinted glass than just seeing clearly through something unremarkable like a street lamp. Very unique.
| Morcirith 1/13/06 . chapter 1
dusty eyes! i thought of "The Large Glass" by marcel duchamp...only because it is, literally, a dusty window. yeah...carolinians.
| karmakaze 1/11/06 . chapter 1
Interesting idea. Just a simple statement that could lead to a lot of open-ended thought. Great work.
| ChildofRevelation 1/10/06 . chapter 1
True on so many levels. I thought it was beautiful. A poem that tells everyone what they don't really want to hear but already know. That's what makes it so good. to me at least.
| blacklives4ever 1/9/06 . chapter 1
I've noticed that you like to get us to feel what you're feeling, then add something to jerk us out of the mood. It's really interetsing how you do that. I noticed it also in the butterfly one, too, with the plane coming out of nowhere. You have a distinct style that kind of knocks me out of it so suddenly that the only thing that comes to mind is "well, that came outta left field."
This one made me smile. You have a real knack for this and I look forward to read more of your work, but that'll have to wait until tomorrow. It's bedtime for me.
Great job. You're extremely talented, I love it.
| breezy nostrils 1/9/06 . chapter 1
interesting...and a fresh look. i like that about it. keep on writing!
| Elizabeth Bilberry 1/8/06 . chapter 1
Like that saying, hey, 'don't judge a book by its cover'. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
| Moondog Dozier 1/8/06 . chapter 1
Very unexpected ending. This was set up very well. Running through a somewhat ordinary scene into an unexpected sight, then an ending that seems kind of circular, and philosophical. Well done.