Hey, well done! I'm drunk! I like all the danger. All the blood; very bold of you. Freaking nasty.

I know you wrote this a long time ago but I'm scouring FP for some really good stuff, and I want you to know that this one is really sick and exciting so far. Good job!

...I'm not sure if this was what you were aiming for, but I was giggling the entire time I was reading this. If it's not what you WERE hoping for, then... uh... oops. ^_^
Well, I loved it and it was fantastically funny, and... yeah. XD

This is the most fantastically gory thing I've ever read. The order of the events is a tad ambiguous at times, but the story is otherwise brilliant. Michael is a fantastic character. He's repulsive but at the same time dangerously enticing.
I especially enjoyed how he managed to corrupt Alicia by the end, there's nothing better than innocence defiled.

Great read, man, although strangely enough I didn't find it really gory at all, just bloody enough. Then again I write zombie fiction, so I could be biased, so who knows, right?

I did the characters, especially Michael Sullivan. In too man stories, I've always rooted for the bad guy that seemed more interesting then the good guy, but to no avail. FINALLY, I see the bad guy gets his time to shine and I enjoyed it. I also liked how you had moments of humanity and even remorse to surface now and again which just fleshed the character out even more and added extra complexities that made the story a must read.

The plot was a little over the top, but I think that added to its dark charm...sometimes you need a story so out there its bordering on the extremely improbable, just as long as its well written, which this was. The pacing was excellent...never dragged, never stalled, and something was always ready to pop off just around the corner. Only a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major.

All in all, I thought it was goodness. Kind of makes me think of what would Showtime's Dexter be like if he was an unrepentant cannibal, and that's a good thing. Cheers!

it was...awesome. beautifully awesome. the descriptions were perfect and gave me a look into a cannibal's mind frame. i just wish it was longer.

This is great but I had to stop here due to a wee bit of queasiness- not the best thing to read as you're just getting over the stomach flu, no?

The ending is well, amazing. You have a great writing style and I much appreciate you putting me on your C2. This story... is just... excellent!

Well, the next chapter is the last. I'm looking forward.
The action and gore in this is fantastic. =D

She plucks a knife from the drawer?!
Action is good, suspense is good. I am wondering what will happen to him, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Dude! This is better than ever!
I am hopping on to the next chapter.
The main person in this story fills me with amazement.

The action in this story is fantastic - and the last line, as always, is hugely catchy. I love the gore descrptions.

The end line is great.
This story is getting better and better. However the idea that the person has got away for so long is perhaps a little deceiving?

This is gripping, well-written and steps well into the persona of the murderer. I like his tactics and his skills in listening for sounds. Good stuff. Onto next chapter and adding this to favourite stories.

Awesome story. Almost no gramatical errors. No spelling errors.Descriptions were extremely real and life like, and the subject matter was wonderfully creative. You made it more than just blood and gristle, but an extremely interesting story. This was suggested to me by a friend, and I'll be sure to suggest it to everybody else I know who would love to read this.

~Nait