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Violent Messiah 2008-07-17 ch 7,	abuseGreat read, man, although strangely enough I didn't find it really gory at all, just bloody enough. Then again I write zombie fiction, so I could be biased, so who knows, right? I did the characters, especially Michael Sullivan. In too man stories, I've always rooted for the bad guy that seemed more interesting then the good guy, but to no avail. FINALLY, I see the bad guy gets his time to shine and I enjoyed it. I also liked how you had moments of humanity and even remorse to surface now and again which just fleshed the character out even more and added extra complexities that made the story a must read. The plot was a little over the top, but I think that added to its dark charm...sometimes you need a story so out there its bordering on the extremely improbable, just as long as its well written, which this was. The pacing was excellent...never dragged, never stalled, and something was always ready to pop off just around the corner. Only a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major. All in all, I thought it was goodness. Kind of makes me think of what would Showtime's Dexter be like if he was an unrepentant cannibal, and that's a good thing. Cheers!
Razz the Demon of the Shado... 2007-12-19 ch 7,	abuseit was...awesome. beautifully awesome. the descriptions were perfect and gave me a look into a cannibal's mind frame. i just wish it was longer.
Jessica Wolfheart 2007-08-02 ch 2,	abuseThis is great but I had to stop here due to a wee bit of queasiness- not the best thing to read as you're just getting over the stomach flu, no?
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 7,	abuseThe ending is well, amazing. You have a great writing style and I much appreciate you putting me on your C2. This story... is just... excellent!
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 6,	abuseWell, the next chapter is the last. I'm looking forward. The action and gore in this is fantastic. =D
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 5,	abuseShe plucks a knife from the drawer?! Action is good, suspense is good. I am wondering what will happen to him, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abuseDude! This is better than ever! I am hopping on to the next chapter. The main person in this story fills me with amazement.
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 3,	abuseThe action in this story is fantastic - and the last line, as always, is hugely catchy. I love the gore descrptions.
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 2,	abuseThe end line is great. This story is getting better and better. However the idea that the person has got away for so long is perhaps a little deceiving?
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is gripping, well-written and steps well into the persona of the murderer. I like his tactics and his skills in listening for sounds. Good stuff. Onto next chapter and adding this to favourite stories.
Naitachal666 2007-04-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseAwesome story. Almost no gramatical errors. No spelling errors.Descriptions were extremely real and life like, and the subject matter was wonderfully creative. You made it more than just blood and gristle, but an extremely interesting story. This was suggested to me by a friend, and I'll be sure to suggest it to everybody else I know who would love to read this. ~Nait
TryagainandI'llbite 2007-04-24 ch 1,	abuseHey I think the story Eat was fantastic!
Steven Wylie 2007-04-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt was great story, i enjoyed the twists in plot, and all the action. But, my favorite part was the ending, how everything fell perfectly into place.
pseudonym-of-mine 2007-03-01 ch 7,	abuseNow this is some good stuff. I nearly pissed my pants laughing when I read the spaghetti line.
xXRei-DamienXx 2007-02-02 ch 7,	abuse. . .that was sickening and intense. . .I LOVED IT! Godd job! 10/10!

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