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| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-29 ch 1,  | abusewow, i really like the theme...and i also like the disturbance in this poem, like there is something dark in it...very good job...oh and somehow, this reflects my poem "charm crystals for purple faces"...pls do check it out...and thanks for the review... truly yours... |
| bread and circuses 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseWhee! I was mentioned! I feel special. This is chilling. I wanted chilling to be in italics. I really love the image I get from this, it's so creepy and beautiful. |
| Plinky 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, unique idea. It's so short, and yet it works so well. It's kind of horrifying and bewitching all at once. Good work! Keep writing! |
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Hel... 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I think I love a lot of your stuff but this one is different then a lot of stuff you find. The imagery was fantastic and made me fall in love with it. |
| Lavender341 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked this!! This will certainly make me think next time I ask for a diamond necklace ;-) It's a bit dark, but that's what makes it good. I love the last line, and the fact that you called the character "darling", as I love that pronoun for some reason. Anyway, keep writing!! Thank you for reviewing my poem, "Champagne Kisses"! I appreciate it! |
| sloppy firsts 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abusehey you changed your name..slightly.i like this. i almost expected the guy to go 'and now you'll never lose it' nice. -chaos |
| forgotten-magick 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abusethis is interesting. it's sort of like talking about love i think. it hurts and even if you fall out of love with someone, you still never really get rid of them. i like it. short, but good. |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abusei love the idea of stitching diamonds onto someone's skin. the images here are so painful and lovely; i love how the beginning contrasts with the end. it's almost saying be careful what you ask for. i really liked this. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this, it was simple yet so effective |
| poet tree 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abusei have never ever thought of anything like this poem, and it's so freaking well-written. i love it. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseVery well balanced as the want turns to need back to want then to implied unwanted. Just an interpretation, but it bounces well from the two extremes. |
| a lonely september 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuse-smiles- oh yay i feel special. i think this was wonderful, i love the theme of it all. i recently wrote something along this theme, but it was more tattoo-style. beautiful job. i'm glad my work inspired you. : ) |
| classic violet 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's... exotic. Different. But very good. I love it is displayed. Either way I like it a lot. |
| Ryustorm 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abusei liked it, interesting combination of spaces and italics, it was a little freaky and i couldn;t get this picture of frankenstein out of my head. lol. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI love this a lot. It's somehow a reminder of torture, and how that everlasting feeling of sorrow will be felt through that necklace. Good job. |