Gorgeously written, amazing poem! Keep writing!

Anna

truly inspiriing its been awhile since i last seen fireworks, but you poem described the sight well and refreshed my memories good work

keep writing!

beautifully and perfectly described.. awesome

Cute poem. It stands out against all the other dark poems here and it just makes you want to smile. Nice job, keep up the good work.

-bunnyrabbit228

Yes, fireworks are extremely beautiful. Your descriptions are truly amazing, and even though we don't write it down, we definitely feel the same way when we admire the fireworks.

I like this. It's so simple, but the images and description are very pretty. Nice write :)