"I’m on my knees for you (that’s how you always liked it)" Very vivid image there. I also adored the last stanza. Especially "Every star shines until it falls" That's just beautiful. Very emotional piece, I really enjoyed. Never stop writing. (And love your pen name, lol!)

Beautiful! That's all I can say. Thank you for the reviews and you're going on author alert. ^_^

'Lifeblood (black.like these lonely nights) poured(no remorse.no pity.say goodbye)from this' oh, sigh, this was so gorgeous. you amaze me.

wow i liked this a lot i can really feel emotions of despair and angish...great job...keep writing forever and always...please R&R me sometime...

Twisted Harmony

This was very angst-ridden. The idea of remorse (?) and desperation was very very visible and the descriptions that you used was mostly deep and agonizing. Good job with the flow.

this is amazing. it is so powerful and so emotional. i loved the detail and the formatting. amazing work.