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| thursdays and rain 2006-03-10 ch 1,   | miasma - that word is just delicious.. lovelove everything. hearts ♥ |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-11 ch 1, | m it reminds me of me? anyway, relatable and beautiful. you got a way with words. |
| a lonely september 2006-01-17 ch 1, | the imagery is wonderful. a lost feeling. |
| classic violet 2006-01-14 ch 1, | The title is very interesting and fresh. I loved the first two lines: "the sun hides itself behindstilled clouds of soporous solicitation" Beautiful. Keep writing! |
| twenty-second seduction 2006-01-08 ch 1, | this is beautiful imagery. |
| lackluster 2006-01-08 ch 1, | i adore the wording. the way you write some things is beautiful beyond saying. "i am a drifter in this sky of eternal spotless blue" i love that image. |