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| Plinky 2006-02-26 ch 1,   | Beautiful. Lovely. THat's all I can say! I love it! |
| LavenderFox-Daisy 2006-02-05 ch 1, | wow really liberating love how it alternated, the structure is brillinat and love the meanings in each of the sentences- ur a great poet! cant wait to read the rest of ur poems! fave phrase is 'let me see the world with eyes wide shut' so well written and the meaning is almost contradictive trhat is why its so rich! |
| angelfire25 2006-02-03 ch 1, | its great i love it espeacialy the last two lines |
| wolfeh 2006-01-10 ch 1, | Amazing writing again, I LOVED the last line SO much!! |