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   toinfinity 9/5/11 . chapter 1all i can say is that i thought this poem was truly, amazing |
| prado.red 6/25/09 . chapter 1 This breaks my heart. And the allusion to Shakespeare...wonderfully placed. |
| barelyamiable 6/4/08 . chapter 1 Just so sweet and sad. It was a beautiful journey down memories I never had. The allusions were amazing and it was a pleasure to read. I truly loved it. |
| xlilxleex 7/17/07 . chapter 1 i really like this one! haha sorry, I'm not good at giving useful feedback. all i can think to say, is that i really like this one! |
| Her Wishing Well 6/21/07 . chapter 1 Amazing especially these lines: "I’ll never forget those times we danced along the skyline or when you tried to jump over the moon in the water." |
| sunshineofyourlife 1/15/07 . chapter 1 aw. :( excellent writing. so sad. -ZuriHanato/Sunshine |
| Holly Rose E 4/27/06 . chapter 1 this made my heart break. so tender, bitter... |
| wind up car in motion 3/10/06 . chapter 1 from "and the angels wept" until the end is my favorite part and particularly beautiful, but certain phrases all throughout this just catch my eye; "danced along the skyline", allusions to promise rings, etc. i adore it. |
| Benjamin - To Be Deleted 3/6/06 . chapter 1 I don't know what to say... This is amazing. I tend to overuse that word, but it is true. I am stunned at the impact this had. It sent chills down my spine, and that's good. Beautiful imagery, the flow and rythm are... flawless. Keep it up! -benjamin |
| nofaceme 3/4/06 . chapter 1 Great poem! I loved "and the angels weptcradling my hyperventilatingheart out from the rain"...very interesting line...and I loved "Romeo and Juliet were never ment to be." ohoho such wonderful poetry! Keep it up! |
| boys kiss girls 2/27/06 . chapter 1 I'm so sorry for your loss. Wow. Great descriptions. |
| dancingintherain 2/22/06 . chapter 1 very bittersweet with the mention of Romeo and Juliet in the ending but a nice touch to it...i loved your vivid imagery and that your short lines really made emotions stand out...this is really, really good! wow, why didn't i check this out before? lol keep writing! |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2/19/06 . chapter 1 Favorite line: "Happily ever after was written just for us." OMG, this is so heartbreaking. You get your emotions across well, and I can see why you got so many reviews! Great job. Keep writing! :) |
| Smellen 2/16/06 . chapter 1 this is really beautiful. good work, keep it up x x |
| Pink Sparrow 2/3/06 . chapter 1 I love the links to Romeo and Juliet. The whole thing was amazing and I love the way its written. Its beautiful. |
