I liked this. I know the feeling of just listening to music and spacing out for a while. Good job.

I love the lines "To disappear in a puff of smoke./And slip to the bottom of the sky." The twisting images in this poem remind me of branches- one just sort of sprouts from another. It's very cool.

I totally understand what u mean. fine i dont. u suck!

That's amazing. I like how you used music as a shield. It helps a lot to be able to zone out the world. I like the similies about the leaves. Nice job.

hey. nice poem. the world seems like a ** place to live in doesn't it? we all have our depressing moments :)