i like the first stanza alot. maybe because it was the one that flowed the smoothest. but anyway, i like the way you write about God in your poems. good job :)

p.s. thanks for your review in my poem.

One of THE deepest, most awesome, rythmic, and best rhyming deviations ever... this is a spectacular poem on all accounts... this reaches very far in anyone's heart... this is so awesome... you're a great writer! just... wow...