Loved this whole thing. Probably liked the part from "And/ Don't/ Forget/ that you promised to wake up tomorrow/ No matter how hard it may be..." to the ending. The last line kicked ass.

that's heartbreaking. well written and gorgeous.

'with eyes like crushed diamonds' beautiful.

Amazingly tragic use of form and emotion. Speaks volumes in empathy and sadness. Good work on a difficult subject to express.