A fresh breath of air considering all those clichéd vampire stories. Funny.

I like this...it's interesting and unexpected. I wish it continued into a story :-S

Delightful! This little clip holds interest- something a lot of writers cannot manage. It is original and wow, I must say, I loved the opening paragraph. I loved how it was down to earth, funny, and yet so relate-able ( I think I just made up that word to get my feelings across, heh ).

How she gave the cabby a different address was great too- I never would have thought of that. I'd be all, "Yup! Right here! Come in for some coffee? Biscuits? A litre of my blood?" Ah ha.

I also liked the modern-woman touch to the story. Your main character (even if it was only a short piece) wasn't a blundering bimbo Mary Sue. *sigh* Fantastic. You deserve a serious box of cookies. Yes, a whole box.

Much praise to you, I can only find one flaw... there isn't any more. I wanted the cabby to come back... *puppy eyes* You created such an endearing character with him, that I find myself left, wondering where did he go? Back to his basement? I can picture him cuddled in an armchair in a windowless basement, fast asleep and grinning. With fuzzy bunny slippers. D'aww... Dang it! The fluff in me is running unchecked again! I really need to look into medication for my fluff romance problem..

Well, to wrap it all up, what a job well done! I'm smacking you on my favorite authors list. I'm so sick of seeing Mary Sues that you deserve it for lack there of alone. Cheers!

Very cute! Awesome! great! amazing, fantastic! (sry for the "cute")
it was well writen and well done :) i love it

your Tin,

Melanoleuko