Aw...Everyone can relate.

You really have a flair for writing haikus, you know that? Another beautifully written one. EXCELLENCE!

ah, so softly sad, if you get my meaning. very original. I love the way you break up the poem.

p.s. thnx for reviewing my "Silver and Blue" poem. I'm glad you liked it. I know you don't like reading long poems, but I think you might like my "True Exhaustion", and my friend Raspberry Twirl's "Dusty Glass Slippers."

p.s.s. will you read "Archaic Hunt"? no one has reviewed it yet.

A common metaphor but with a nice spin. Lovely. Keep writing.

Kind of bittersweet and gentle. Nice image.

Peace, Daze

Gentle and sweet! I love the bridge between "kisses" and "tears". Keep up the good work!