   Mairi Cross 2006-03-14 . chapter 1Nice...I like it. |
 Eirien 2006-01-17 . chapter 1Wow. Powerful piece, so simple yet speaks volumes. The image of the rose is used perfectly, and the poem makes one really aggressive towards that "he" person. Great piece. |
 indentured-servant 2006-01-12 . chapter 1quite beautifully written =) |
 The Postscript 2006-01-12 . chapter 1Beautiful...and I always love to see an author willing to stray a little bit from the structure and create their own. Keep writing. |
 thursdays and rain 2006-01-12 . chapter 1heart-wrenching & sad & tragic & ohso beautifully written -♥- |
 Dale Christopher 2006-01-10 . chapter 1Crulety to the innocent. Ouch.
Peace, Daze |
 Amilen 2006-01-09 . chapter 1 U don't suck! I love any form of poetry except 4 Haiku. but your Haiku has made me fall in love with this form of poetry. thankyou.thankyou so much. i know this sounds really corny i hope i'm not just annoying you. keep writing and writing poetry |
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