Reviews for The 1147 Victoria outbound

poppy nowis 2006-04-17 ch 1,	really good, i love the ending lines, and the layout/format whatever you call it is very clever
Jezsh 2006-01-11 ch 1,	who hasn't loved the stranger on the train before? You just caught that feeling. I like the stop-start quality of this - not so sure about the single letter lines but at the same time I can't imagine it differently. Great piece.
a lonely september 2006-01-09 ch 1,	'Or(worse)The weatherAnd grin as if to sayWhat-can-you-do?' wow. have thought it so many times. 'dont think that i didnt love you for 37 minutes' beautiful. this poem was gorgeous. lovely job.
lady-in-the-mirror 2006-01-09 ch 1,	SHINY POME IZThe broken line thing works. Bunching things up and drawing them out... Not makings sense, as ever. C x
moralofthestory 2006-01-09 ch 1,	That's very symbolic. The jerky rhythm of the poetry echoes the rough ride on the train, and the spacing makes a unique effect on the way that the poem is read aloud, which I actually tried after I read it silently. This is marvellous. Truly.
Iris Early 2006-01-09 ch 1,	I LOVE THIS. The broken lines DO work. x