Dang girl... intense is an understatement! This was really well done. I've never done (or really read) a suicide story before (I don't really understand suicide, so I think it would be pointless to write about it). Very eye opening... you're a really talented writer, I looked through a few of your other stories and you definitely have some literary skillz! ;) Keep it up!

(PS. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!)

This almost made me cry.

This was lovely... so sad, but somehow so beautiful.

Lovely style, beautiful imagery, the ending was perfect.

How did you turn suicide into something like this?

WOw. Keep writing!

Okay, and this really isn't criticism, but I usually detest stories about suicide. However, this was actually written very tastefully, which was refreshing. Your descriptions were beautiful and horrifying at the same time, something that I've come to expect from you. I like how you used the carpet as almost an integral part of her death. Almost like it was sucking her life force from her or something. It was interesting. Nice job. As always. ;o)