This ones good, quite good. My suggestion this time is actually even more leniant. Just read this aloud to yourself, I noticed some parts that could flow a bit better in my opinion, but if you read it aloud then you can see for yourself what may need changing.

I like this a lot... sounds really good. there is one suggestion yet again though. "But he won’t relize

That I like him" would be the perfect spot to end.. or maybe end with "Sunset shadows dream" but cut the middle part. Its just bulky and changes the flow of the poem

lol was random written at start i hope that goes well

but the poem yay was good good keep writen