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| words music and love stay t... 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I really like this poem! It has such wonderful imagery! And great rhythm! I always love your poems! The Scotish Dragon |
| SSSSS 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. What acn I say? Very good poem you have here. Um... I'm totally clueless as to what else to say. Tschau,Sam |
| Smoky Bear 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abusenice use of colour to signify time passing. great word flow, the gentle internal rhymes are subtle. a vibrant, well depicted image. |
| a lonely september 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abusei loved all the detail in this, the first verse was especially wonderful & 'hanging, dew-drop-daffodil, a little South of what you mean.' that made me smile. : ) |