I love this! It flows nicely, and it's so wonderfully detailed!

I also like the ending. Instead of the usual rhythm, you added just the little extra line.

I like how your poems flow as if they weren't broken fragments but one complete sentence...

Lovely, your use of tastes, and reference to the kissing of 'that man'. This is pulled together beautifully.

I like this. A lot. The idea of swallowing the ocean..wow. Love it.

I just realized you're not on my favorite authors list...weird. K, you're on it now :).

This was yummy. I could totally feel the relationship between "her" and "that man". I love the title, too. I really like "as she's kissing tha man/ whispering those non-words/ underneath her breath..." Nice job on this one.

lovely. "and he can barely taste the salt on her lips from her last snack" wow, that was so detailed, it gave so much more meaning to the poem. i loved it.

Lovely moving interaction in this. The summary, and those lines themselves in this really capture the imagination.

wow...powerful. I loved the imagery in this, it really adds to it. keep on going!

oh, god, i practically cried as i read this, it was so gorgeous but i felt pain reading it anyway. the details were so gorgeous in here, the way you described her breah, the way you described her, everything. salt was a great thing to describe, bitter, sweet, but we need it, don't we? beautiful job.