 karinhate 2009-10-31 . chapter 12that truce is not going to work |
 LadyShinkukaze 2009-09-05 . chapter 12Love it~ Keep it up and update soon XD |
 SkateForLife 2008-11-16 . chapter 12Hah, Rynora's a bit of a hard-headed girl. She's ridiculously stubborn, which I guess is her character flaw. This story's excellent so far and I have to say, you throw in some small lines that always make me laugh out loud. Good job and update soon! |
 SapphireEyes16 2008-08-18 . chapter 2please update soon! |
 SapphireEyes16 2007-12-27 . chapter 1this first chapter is hilarious! so keep updating |
 Evenstar1389 2007-11-26 . chapter 12Oh wow Rynora is too unfeeling. A normal person would feel concerned if someone she knew was in a car crash, even if she supposedly dislikes him. Ashton with Sharlotte?Omg No. hate Sharlotte, Ashton's too nice a guy for her. And besides pairing siblings with siblings, and best friends with best friends makes it a really small world o.O |
 Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2007-10-08 . chapter 12gaw, wicked.
talk about spunky characters! rynora (unique name!) sure can be a... uh... little over the top in her insults. haha, oh well, adds to her character :D |
 Jestry 2007-09-30 . chapter 11“I like how you’re horizontal and I’m vertical,”
Haha.
HAHAHAHAHAHA.
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 Jestry 2007-09-30 . chapter 12Aww.
Julian's so forgiving. :]
Update soon. ^^ |
 White Rose Blossom 2007-08-27 . chapter 12E, great story! Love it :)
Love the relationship between them. Personally though, I must say, judging by the pictures you picked for your characters, Ashton is so my favorite. But that's only because of that one pic. Hot.
Anyway, hope to read more soon, love to see what happens!
-Aria |
 the invisible poet 2007-08-19 . chapter 12i liked this chapter. :-D especially that conversation between rynora and julian. very nice touch. |
 Lilly Wattenberg 2007-08-18 . chapter 12Please up date this story, i want to know what happens next.
Keep up the good work.
Lilly. |
 PinkEyedBoy 2007-08-16 . chapter 12LOVE! I offer you this fake pineapple that I stuffed with lots of yummy chocolate covered fruits and matching party hat!
Guess what? I have a girly-crush on Rynora. Julian deserves someone nicer though. *sniff sniff*
Update soon because I adore you like pineapple on a pizza! |
 A.K.A. Writer's Block 2007-07-14 . chapter 12okay, so, let me first get this out of the way so i can rant: i deeply love your story it's amazing you better update or death will fall on your head and eat you.
and now:
WHAT THE HELL? WHY WASN'T SHE MORE ** OFF? ergh, everyone in stories makes everyone else so much more forgiving than i want them to be. haven't people ever heard of a grudge? i want her to,like, shun christi and alex and julian! urgh!
i have nothing against you. it just makes me angry when people forgive within a chapter of a thing that makes me personally ** off. like, what they did made me ** off, and i hadn't forgiven them yet, and... this is starting to sound like a flame. it's not. i just feel insanely ** right now.
well, gotta go.
love,
izzie. |
 urjellingcauseimevil 2007-07-12 . chapter 12O NO U DIDNT *SNAP SNAP* god! end it at the best moment why dont you? UPDATE REALLY SOON!
Love.Peace.Update.Kira |