That is a very god description of a lion. You used really good imagery. Great job. Please read and review my stuff.

That's beautiful. Truly beautiful. The poem is powerful in so many ways. Jesus is King!

Wow, this poem is almost as powerful as the lion itself. Great job.

i really really like this! its great! i love the theme!Liz

Nicely written! woo Jesus, the Lion of Judah yet also the Lamb of God. I love Him!

O by the way, you've read "cold mountain"? That's cool, I had to read it for my English Literature class this year and take an exam on it. I'm believing I passed haha!

Anyway, I'm rambling on...sorry!God Bless,xRachx

Very cool Matt.

Jos!ah.

beautiful.

I like this. It's nice to think of Him as being so protective and loving.

Lovely, and I'm not a terribly religious person as a rule. I like the idea of Jesus as a lion - it's why the Narnia books were so appealing to me.

This is really beautiful. It's nice to know that there are still people out there who believe. I think you're very talented, I'm gonna check out some of your other

nice metaphor i have to say. good.