If I'm completely honest, I did not understand this poem a whit, and therefore did not like it much. I didn't understand the phrase 'she cums like Gucci'. Is that supposed to be... she gets excited like Gucci? She get's excisted BY Gucci?

And also, what does 'Nirvana, (undone!)' articulate. And why is this poem called 'poet'? Is the girl you're talking about the poet? And if so, how does she 'cum like Gucci'?

I'm sorry, I did not like this poem.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in profile)

that was weird, I try to understand but I can't get the deal.

um... ok.

haha. interesting.

I liked how you channeled passion through clothing. keep writing

hahaha, wow...that's pretty cool.

ok

well done , nirvana is the best

wow just wow!SarahJane

oh... very nice. cutting.

Nice poem, but I didn't catch the Gucci reference.

BTW, I saw that you wrote over 310 poems...wow...

A fabulous little piece of passion & fashion. I love the way this is considered. It's hot in eroticism, yet a the same time far deeper that first appears.

Needless to say; Loved it!

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

Once again showing us your mind is stranger and move wonderful than all of ours, Juliet. I loved it.

Peace, Daze

... disturbing... i like!

Simply amazing.