Hm, the themes of your poem are confusing but interesting; while I cannot discern the exact significance and character of the silence, I am tantalized, and the line "Their voices must be too pure" is very well-written, kuudos on that! I dearly want to watch One Flew Over...

Ohgosh I randomly visited your fp and this poem is really good I like it a lot. The entire poem feels correct and it's interesting!

Hello! I was requested to review this poem yesterday. (heh no prizes for guessing who I am) I like the way you describe the idea of silence being pure and untainted. I also liked the "how they ring like gunshots" part the best. The imagery is very apt too! Good work!