I love it! It's so neat how (and this is what I'm picturing, forgive me if I assume too much) this gorgeous girl, amazing dancer, is being leered at by all these disgusting men, and all she has her mind on is how the music affects her...
Keep it up!
~Daughter of Music

Wow, that was very nicely written, I loved it!

These trix are not for kids! ^_^. I like the sensuality in this poem. If you listen to a slow, romantic background music-say from Pretty Guardian Sailormoon-this poem is better to read.