i didn't love this at first reading, but now i do- especially the end. it's pretty profound and yet light enough to nearly make me laugh. it's great and i love you!

Sorry for what I wrote in that other review. The stuff about 'trying little rhymes'. Sorry. Ignore it. I didn't mean to say you were at all bad. I like this one a lot, and I like the point you make.

Wow. The imagery is powerful. It's a beautiful piece. I love it! And it's so true too. Keep it up- I love the way you write.

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig

I love the poem, it's a great way to show people's aversion to change...I also like how you talked about little poeple huddling together...really original and poignant peice. Your pen name is cute, btw - isn't it German for the little mouse?