It flows quickly, its good. Keep it up!

I thought this was quite calm after reading the poem about madness...well, most of it was calm and dream-like :)

The ending was-is a bit of a sharp twist to the rosy state I was in reading it.

Meh, to all dreams should come an end I suppose?

But that didn't lessen my liking this one.

i think i read this, but it was really good! i like it! nice job my sita!! wonderful job! ^^

*grins* ABCAABDEE (Slant rhyme like most of the others)FBGHBDDIJAm I close? And by the way. You are right to like and be proud of this poem, it is one of the best of yours I have read.

The first stanza flows extremely well. Lines, "Swirling hues and pinks and blues-Fluorescent lights...", creates a wonderful floating image, and then brings it back to concrete, "Fluorescent lights", great contrast. Good work.