Excellent, professional standard and modern ease. Delicious blend.

I love a well-done sonnet. I really have to try writing one of those someday. >_> Me aside, I do appreciate this, for the language and the message. You have the rhythm down really well. "You sealed my condemnation with a breath..." I like that. Words can be strange weapons...you wield them well. ;)

*Sigh* the return of the Queen...or perhaps the bard reincarnate...you never cease to amaze...ive missed your light in the abyss MLF

I am so jealous of you! Your words hardly have a pause between them, they flow so smoothly in rhyme. Another intricate job outstandingly well done. Good job.