|Reviews for I've moved on|
| Blood in Water 11/23/06 . chapter 1
This is gorgeous; the round-about way, the easy way the words flow.
I read it aloud, and I just marveled at it. Beautiful word-choice.
| InspirASIAN 1/29/06 . chapter 1
i should send my x this
| Princess-anna57 1/18/06 . chapter 1
_ *applaudes*, great work! So short, yet so effective. You're really good at those kind of poems!
How have you been? Send me an e-mail sometime, i'd be great to hear from you!
Bye now! _
| Brian 1/14/06 . chapter 1
Its good seems like the ffej story to me though to bad he wont read it
| Jeffro the Clown 1/10/06 . chapter 1
Well I don't know what to say other than I guess do what's right in your heart...-Jeff
| Abby Sequioa 1/10/06 . chapter 1
wow, can we say BLUNT? nice poem lol
| Melissa O'Day 1/10/06 . chapter 1
It was good, but it didn't flow. But other than that it was really good! P.S. are you in Power of the Pen this year?
| BJ Worth 1/10/06 . chapter 1
interesting poem. Maybe some imagery would improve it a bit.