This is gorgeous; the round-about way, the easy way the words flow.

I read it aloud, and I just marveled at it. Beautiful word-choice.

i should send my x this

bravo

_ *applaudes*, great work! So short, yet so effective. You're really good at those kind of poems!

How have you been? Send me an e-mail sometime, i'd be great to hear from you!

Bye now! _

Anna

Its good seems like the ffej story to me though to bad he wont read it

Well I don't know what to say other than I guess do what's right in your heart...-Jeff

wow, can we say BLUNT? nice poem lol

It was good, but it didn't flow. But other than that it was really good! P.S. are you in Power of the Pen this year?

interesting poem. Maybe some imagery would improve it a bit.