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Reviews For: Sable's Story
Silmarwen Vanimedle
2006-01-11
ch 3, 		abuseyay i'm glad you updated.
thelovinspoonful
2006-01-10
ch 2, 		abuseWow! I really like what you have so far. The only confusing thing is the Ember/Sam interchanging. I'm assuming they're the same person now, but it was really confusing at first because they just kinda popped out of nowhere.
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