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by His blood 2006-08-25 . chapter 1
thank you for adding me to your favorites ... it really does mean a lot to me. i love this poem -- even the format adds strength and power to such a strong, meaningful piece. 'beyond the cotton candy clouds of acid dreams' -- ** gorgeous line. 'and the ugly faces of those who dared to chase her into the dark darkening sphere watching her claw and choke on the rubber of that damned black balloon' -- absolutely beautiful. somehow raw, grating and abrasive but in such a beautiful way. i love this. [adds to favorites]
Sin 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
This is really awsome. I'm not sure if I understand it, but I do love it. Brill images. Write more?
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