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| in tesseraction 2006-05-24 ch 1,  | abusethis is amazing. first part made my breath catch in my throat. |
| hoowdoideletethisaccount 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abusehehe. This is cute and adorable and whimsical, but also very wistful-- with just enough reflectiveness to make it sad. Intriguing little piece indeed. I like it very much. Take care. |
| My New Pen Name 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. It makes me picture such artificial, glittery, sparkly. . . Las Vegas-esque sorts of things. Beautiful.Peterpanpeterpan. . .: D |
| simpleplan13 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... i like the whole fiary thing a lot |
| sarah1491 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseVery unique, and, well, I don't know how to explain it, but I just love it! ^_^" |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abusevery beautiful and touching, without making it very clear what's happening. this kind of vagueness makes me swoon. |
| mezzie 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseseems surface simple but definitely reaches into complexities and all sorts of tangledness. I like when that happens! mezzie |
| backseats on thursdays 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abusePeterpan -- faux posh... Tinkerbell -- splenda crystals (sparkledust). A genius title. |
| beti213 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusewhen i've grown young... sounds like nonsense but what makes this poem intriguing is that it isn't. in some sense it's real and that's one you managed to convey.and that last line's killer: "you're pretty when you cry." people are always telling girls to smile because it makes them look prettier but this... it implies that it is even more natural to cry, that it is an essential part of the human condition-that it is becoming and honest. sheesh."breathless traces of faux posh and splenda crystals" I didn't quite understand what you were getting at here, but I got an impression of glamour, and there is a sort of glitter to this poem, even in the tears...I love how your work fits together in subtle ways. wonderful. |
| re x invented 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed reading this. i like the vague element of poetry, how so many conclusions can be drawn. where some authors fall apart at the end, you pulled it together really well. great job. |
| i call it laughable 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abusethe way this poem speaks; the way it's worded is utterly alluring. & gawd, the end was perfection. i keep reading this just because of the words you chose to set in. they're, ah. it's frustrating to find the right word to describe this poem, because, **, there isn't one. |
| like a lover 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abusetinkerbell status... unnattainable... believe me, I've tried. ;) "you're pretty when you cry" I think if someone told me that I'd cry even harder. I can just really feel this somehow. it's perfect. |
| notso darling 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abusethis reminds me of a very pretty break up speech. |
| forsakensmile 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. |
| a lonely september 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abusethis was so beautifully written, completely amazing. |