WOW...WOWI...I think I'm going to cry...*sniff* that was really REALLY good. I love the way you made into two different people, with both of their stories. Very nice, very visual. And yeah...I'm just gonna keep on talking...cause that's what I do...when I'm bored...I guess I should be takling to you guys online, but I keep missing out and have to scroll up and then it keeps moving and I get annoyed. Yup...that's pretty much it. Hey, have you heard of this awesome band? They're so good, it's AMAZING. They're called Green Day, and yeah they're realy good. You should go check them out, as well as anyone else who's reading this review right now. They are well worth your time, TRUST ME. So yeah, Billie Joe's hot. I just thought I'd tell you that. OMG, I just realized that I was listening to Britney Spears!! Ah! *hold up cross* The power of christ compells you! It's ok...it's OK...it's gone *phew* And I thought I had bad taste in music, but no, my sister pulls out Britney Spears and the ace of spades, and I know mine's not nearly as bad as hers. So, back to the poem! Good job, keep it up, that's all i have to say...at the moment...so I'll just be going now! Just remember what I said about Green Day, that's some excellent advice right there. And stop bugging me about it, you've found out now. Frobagg out.