haha..i prefer it to not be physical though..i guess i can cope more easily and i have a low threshold of physical pain. hehs. but still you have described the situation pretty well. though you make want to add more emotions to it :) still, good job.

This is how I feel right now. I'm not letting anyone know how I truely feel. And I'm trying to always smile and be happy, so I don't get asked questions. I like this poem.

very nice:)

Hey thanks for reviewing my poem. I'm glad you like it. And I really can relate to this poem. I bet a lot of people can. It really good.

Sad! very sad. very real. good job!

And relax again

Doing my daily duty’s

With a fake smile

duty's sould be changed to duties.

Love the poem, it's deep and meaningful.