Ch 7: Hm... so many things happening at once. Maybe I'll understand the situation better if I read the Seaman's Brooch chapter. Could you please include it? :)

Ch 5: I think maybe you uploaded the wrong file for this one. This is supposed to be the Seaman's Brooch (Chapter 4). There's a way you can fix it, though.

Ch 4: Several hams, and a barrel of cider. Talk about jet fuel! :) Of course, Mr. Evil Badguy Wizard will be watching. Uh-oh, what happened to Tigress? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. :)

Ch 3: Ah, a battle and a riddle. I'm starting to understand the setting of this story now. It reminds me of Final Fantasy X. (with mabybe a little bit of Redwall in the riddle) You're doing good. If I may make one bit of criticism: The line, "I must agree with Magmus. Why have you brought us here?" sounds a little bit unnecessary, I think. One thing I like about your story is that you have many types of creatures working together, helping each other. Good things happen when people can see the value in each other. :)

RE: Chapter 2. Go, Tigress! Get'em! :D

Howdy Angel Tigeress! (or Crimson Renegade) I'm curious. How did you find my story? Review for the first chapter:It's very nice so far, involving cat-people, no less. :-) I wonder what surprises are in store for Tigress? I like it how you started the story out with a Bible verse. This first chapter reminds me of a certain furrie mother-and-child painting I saw on Deviant Art. I'll send you a Private Message on the FFC forum to give you the link because I think fictionPress.com eats links. :PWell, I've got to attend to my schoolwork now, but I'll continue to read your story. Bye!

The story still isn't developing, I think. I mean, the writing's good and easy to read but is the only real concept in chapter one the dragon?

Keep up the good work!