Hey! I love your sense of humor. The imagination of little Rafeal reminds me a bit of Calvin from Calvin and Hobbes. I really like the open-ended ending. It kept the story's adventurous and mischievous feel all the way to the end! You obviously put a good deal of spirit in this, perhaps even edited several times. I'd like to see more of your writing capabilities! Maybe more short stories, or perhaps even something longer and continuous.