Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Rakuen
Ceres 2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that was so sad and so beautiful... Thank-you! *sob*

EL 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
That was so sad...but so good
Puppy Kicker 2007-01-11 . chapter 1
I loved this story. Very emotional, descriptive...I don't really know how to describe it, but it was awesome.
Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-17 . chapter 1
okay, I have never(to my knowledge) known a story to make me cry... but you just did with this sad, sad tale...

It's beautiful, truly well-written and amazing! And even though it's sad, I have to save it to favorites. it's that fantastic
Limited Edition 2006-02-04 . chapter 1
*applauses* I love how the words just flow into each other, it's rather inspiring. Great story also!
Yukirin-chan 2006-01-14 . chapter 1
*tear, tear* So sad... So well written. Very nice. *clap, clap* I enjoyed it a lot.
the alien from the right 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
it's been ages since i last read ur fic..and i was quite taken aback by this particular one coz i dun expect it to be **.i dunno a ** abt jap names, so miyake sounds as as much as it can be a girl's name as it can be a guy's. oh i haven tot of ken miyake from v6. lol. anyway, brilliant descriptions. altho not entirely detailed, the images just springed into mind. reminds me of the 5 pple u meet in heaven by mitch albom, the setting that is.
Bluediamond 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Adding story to favourites....Oh, jeebus, I'm all sniffly now. I admit that it was beautiful. Very, very beautiful. But at the same time, I feel extremely, extremely depressed.

The imagery WAS wonderful, and the two boys were so well developed for a short story...I'm still all sniffly... I'm sorry, my reviews are always so useless when the story upsets me! Many apologies!
[sak.] 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
heys. beautiful. now i know why you asked me the question. and i still don't know what those machines are called. but you don't need the name! :D its nice like this. i like the idea of a helium balloon floating away with the ring... and i would like to own such a ring. not from a girl of course. =.= but it sounds pretty xD secret letter writing in the envelopes! muahaha :D

what does the title of the fic mean tho? i'm being slow again... ferris wheel. i liked the description of the light bulbs and the star it made :)
Return to Top