Very interesting, I like it a lot, you must have really put some thought into this one. Good job. I wish I was good as you. No ones reviewing my stories. I’m a bad writer, but if you could review some of my work it would be a big confidence boost. Our maybe you could tell some people on the site about my work.

ThanksBishop Tomb

Ee! That was ADORABLE. What a very touching moment captured so beautifully in this piece. It really made me miss the "good old carefree days" when I would play games with my parents much in the same manner. Thank you for bringing a piece of nostalgia; this was very much a refreshing short story. :)

(-gasp!-) Oh my, delightful! The heartbeat of the magic of childhood.

So many good things. "...the biggest thing in her world, frightening in spite of his tenderness if only because of his enormous bulk" makes me remember what it was like to be someone's little girl, a wonderful sort of truth and and a deep emotional connection.

I love how you observe, how you see things, and how you show them back.

Aww I liked this. For a moment took me back quite a few years to almost the same kind of crazy games I used to play with my dad...well done, and I loved the visuals you've created. :)

Ohh... i like that... it's just this fun SOMETHING:) just like the magic of childhood. and the special power is shown even more brightly by the capitalization... very sweet:)*hugs*

sirius