Wow. This is very well written. I love the structure of the poem and the imagery you evoked. Good job.

I loved this...it was so erotic, but you know...except for the sex part, I can kinda relate with it. You are wonderful!

*bangs head against wall* - one day i hope i will be able to create as much emotion as you did with this poem. So deep I felt part of it, stunning work. thanks...

gods, this was absolutely heart-wrenching &ohso beautifully written..

-sniffles- tissue pls..

oh god, this was so beautiful & torn up. you can feel the pain so strongly it practically hurts, you did s u c h a beautiful job writingt this. everything in this made me want to cry. you have a distinct style & it's gorgeous.