good i will try to find the others i like the caracters

Konnichiwa C!I'm so gald you finnally posted Defenders of Kanrik! (Now if you could only post a certain story involving Yami...) You're writing has improved a lot and I'm glad you used spell-check.I do have to agree with Born A Critic about you slowing down parts, so that they have more meaning, I sometimes have to watch out for that, too. But I LOVE Scarlet! She's so cool!Update soon!Dreamer

I just read your story and I was wondering, why is everyone so emotional? First their mad then sad? Talk about mood swings...Sorry for the rough criticism but I am just like my name is,a born critic. The story was okay but you need to work on slowing down everyone's emotions though I do like this girl Scarlet, she sounds tough. Er, my review is strangely very long so I'm going to go now. If you work a little harder on this story I might actually review you again, of course, if I get the time and a computer. Yeah...I'm borrowing a friend's laptop for awhile while I work on a report that's due in like a week. Oh, I just remembered what this story sounded like! That little anime kid show, Sailor Moon! Did you get inspiration from it? Crap, got to go, it's way late over where I am! A little advice before I go, practice makes perfect!

P.S. Hope you don't get flamed by crazed Sailor Moon fans thinking you stole the idea from the creators, or something like that. !Adios, chica!

Yay, Ally! It is me, Claire!