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Lost without a light 2009-04-23 . chapter 3
I love it! It reads like an experienced authors work. but a chapter every six months? yikes! update more! i can't take the cliff hangers!
Neverending 2008-11-01 . chapter 3
You've gotten better Usagi-chan and I am so pleased to see it! :D I like my sneak preview part in chapter three but I feel a wee bit violated...why? Because you know me so well!! O_o I got all giddy thinking "Hey!! I would do that! EPIC"

Get on with the next chapter, you know how your oneechan hates to wait for cliffhanders :D
Lost without a light 2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Wow! great story! i can't wait for more *glances at update time*... well guess i can, but please update soon! I really like your descriptive writing style and i want to see how you develop your characters who seem well thought out and very real. Hope you update soon!
Iccle Fairy 2007-10-10 . chapter 3
good chapter! keep it up! fran ~*~
Iccle Fairy 2007-10-10 . chapter 2
very good start! really intriguing! good characters and great descriptions! fran ~*~
Iccle Fairy 2007-10-10 . chapter 1
sounds exciting!
Neverending 2007-01-17 . chapter 2
This Jordan fella...is he based off anyone in real life my little imooto? Must I kill and hunt down this guy so he may not beat you at SSB!!...Okay, the onee-san is done being protective now...>>

Anyways, I love the first chapter Ally and for those who do think this will be one of those reincarnations stories- HA- Don't think that, there are so many twists and turns in the plot your head will spin. I know, because I helped a wee bit...like ant's version of wee bit.

So, anyways, update soon Ally...along with Defenders of Kanrik.
SolitaryDreamer 2007-01-16 . chapter 2
*Fangirl squeal* YAYS! Fianlly Angels has begun, though the beginning is a little different than I remember. Anyhoo, I can't wait until the next chappie! Great job Carrot!
Dreamer
DarkBlysse 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
The plot sounds good, although one thing did confuse me: where in the hell did high school come into this? I started reading about a wartorn fantady world, and all of a sudden it's changed to three high school girls trying to learn spells. It might just be how you worded it in the summary, though. I'm sure it'll work out better in the story itself where it can flow a little slower.
Again, this sounds like a pretty cool story. But try not to let it be too cliche with the whole "reincarnated-Angels-save-Earth" theme.
I hope you decide to write it! ^^*
Fork Meets Toaster 2007-01-16 . chapter 2
Complicated? Yes.

Interesting? Yes.

Disappointing? Yes. But only because you've updated ONCE in a whole year. You cannot get me this into a story and then stop! It's not fair!

So please update, kay?

Much loves-- Luci!
Fork Meets Toaster 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
Oh, this looks good! Yes, I'll definately read on!

One thing, though: You keep spelling 'prophecy' as 'proficy'. It kind of takes away from the story.

But the plot and all that, sounds interesting. *reads on*

Much loves-- Luci!
SolitaryDreamer 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
START IT!Angels is really unique and different, and I bet a lot of people would read it if you started it!
K.Vo 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
ALYSON S* V* (I would put your last name, but for privacy, I decided to put the initaial and star the rest) IF YOU DO NOT DRAW THIS STORY, ME, IN ALL MY FEIRY GLORY WILL COME AFTER YOU AND SKETCHBOOK TOO! MWHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Neverending 2006-01-12 . chapter 1
START IT DAMN IT, START IT!
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