 sueb262 2006-01-11 . chapter 1It made ME laugh, as well! It's just sort of perfect: the way you lay out the syllables and the division of the lines feels natural and unforced while simultaneously following good haiku form (although now I have in the back of my mind Sirius's own disclaimer about her RK-world haikus: namely, that, since they are not about nature, they are not strictly haikus but something-else-whose-name-I've-forgotten!).
Anyway, I loved it--thanks! |
 SiriusFan13 2006-01-11 . chapter 1*giggles*I like that... especially "sing-songy" *laughs* not sure why that amuses me so much, but it does... probably because i'm not used to hearing you using technical terms like "sing-songy." But seriously, i like the haiku... very amusing... and such a creative topic:D*glomps* (because i can...lol)
sirius:) |