I loved the contrasting verses in your poem! I also really liked the first 2 verses "my life is black and empty, I cannot see my way. Perhaps if you light a lamp the dark will go away". I usually only read the first few lines of things and then decide whether to keep on going, I definitely wanted to keep reading on this one! Well doneSavetheplanet ps: cool name by the way...

Very clever. And... a bit humorous in places. Oh, well, I like it.

well, it made me laugh :)

Simple but packs quite a punch there, hehe. Impacting, to say the least, if there were such a word. You have just answered half my miserable problems, haha. Jokes aside, this is some great stuff. Keep on parodying!

WiseCrack

How...wow...I don't actually know what to write for this review. I liked it, I loved it. It was...wow.

- Pricilla Grey

This is pure genius and is going on my favorites! Write on!

I am very much amused! Bravo! D